Teh Wozzinator

#1 It was my fourteenth day of playing the violin on the corner of 5th and Rood in New York City. My previous job at Burger Monster had been a ...

My edits in bold. What happened to the older days? Great start! When times were slower, and happiness easier. When a "friend in need", was a "friend indeed". Loved these ...

Sorry, I haven't been on for a long time (I've been gone), so I was only just able to catch up. Also, I have little time for a good crit ...

Wow... *moan*... you got a featured work on your first try. Amazing. I don't have any edits... this was really good. It was a little bit quirky, which is why ...

1) What do you think? Any good? I liked the description, but I think that you could make it a little bit easier to read. 2) a. If this was ...

Sorry, I don't have time for a crit right now, tomorrow I'll read this and edit this post, but I wanted to say... "someone got confused". XD XD :D Okay, ...

No, no, no! I didn't get here first... that's like, a first! XD Great job, again. I liked how now you have a Mutt that acts human, and, surprisingly, is ...

Sorry I'm late... my edits in bold. Prologue You may have heard the story of Pandora’s Box, how Pandora was told not to open a certain object. (I have heard ...

Gryph!! It took you long enough! I've been waiting for forever for this to come out! :D Once again, it was short, and I honestly don't have any edits. I ...

Aedomir, I'm sorry, but I just don't have time to do a full edit on every single chapter of every single story I'm reading. It's hard enough just to keep ...

I liked the idea, but like Alainna, I knew what was going to happen. It did seem to be formatted like poetry, but didn't feel like it. Basically, I agree ...

XD XD XD XD Amazing!! Hilarilous! *insert a bunch of other adjectives with exclamation points!* I have no edits! Great job! Et cetera! Teh Wozzinator! :D

This was interesting. It didn't seem that much like poetry to me, but that's mostly because you split up the lines, and they were really long. I guess your rhythm's ...

B^3... this was awesome, hilarious, and perfect. It cracked me up. I loved your rhythm and your rhyming, and the use of the word lissome was great. Apparently you've already ...

What everyone else said in their first line... You have a really interesting rhythm going on here. It starts out long and starts to get shorter. I don't love it, ...